September 10, 2004

The spirit catches you and you try to think of a rhyme for "lasagna".

Let this serve as your notice, dear reader,
That my entries will now have strict meter.
I believe that this form,
Though it's not now the norm,
Is a trend of which I'll be the leader.

Posted by dianna at September 10, 2004 04:20 PM
Comments

Good on ya!

(I was being supportive of your decision and providing a rhyme for lasagna)

Posted by: jason s at September 10, 2004 07:15 PM

There once was a man from Nantucket...you know the rest.

Posted by: Clint at September 11, 2004 05:51 AM

fine execution.
could any other sister
so perfect the craft?

as for myself, though,
i will stick to syllables.
you handle the rhymes.

Posted by: katie at September 11, 2004 02:56 PM

Rhymes are not the problem; it's meter that's making me tear my hair out. That shit's HARD.

Posted by: Dianna at September 12, 2004 10:23 PM
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